Editing Crime Stories




[Crimeoccurs|First story|Arrest is made|First appearance or arraignment

Preliminary hearing |Second arraignment]



By Stan Ketterer, assistant professor

Copy editors must be very careful when editing stories about crime and the court system. As numerous journalists and scholars have pointed out, it is the small, seemingly innocuous crime briefs that usually get a newspaper into trouble. As a rule, editors and reporters take great care with a major story to guard against libel, i.e. damage to a person's reputation because of the publication of false information. Often, the newspaper's attorney will read the story. But short crime stories normally do not get such close scrutiny. Consequently, the copy desk is usually the last line of defense.

Accuracy and clarity are always the copy editor's primary concerns. The paper's credibility must be upheld, and a copy editor has an obligation to those involved to ensure accuracy. Libel suits can cost newspapers millions of dollars. Even if the newspaper wins the suit, the attorneys' fees can cost millions. The copy editor might be called to testify as well. The best way to avoid libel suits is to prevent them. Question anything in a crime or court story that seems inaccurate or unreasonable. It is much better to have the question answered before the story is published than have to explain why it was published afterward.

A crime occurs

Let's assume that a crime occurs. In this case, two male students who do not know each other get into an argument outside a bar and one student hits the other over the head with a tire iron, resulting in a serious injury. Sensing that the other student has been hurt badly, the student with the tire iron gets into his car and drives away. The police come and take the injured student to the hospital. They can't find the student with the tire iron.

First story

A reporter arrives after the incident has occurred, talks to police and writes a story that comes to you to edit. Now, let's look at some key concerns:

Should the injured person be named in the story? No. Why? In this situation one person has been hurt, the two people do not know each other, and the attacker has not been captured. Consequently, the attacker does not know where the injured person lives. If the paper publishes the injured person's name, the attacker might be able to look up the person's name in the telephone book and try to silence him. In the case of Sandra K. Hyde vs. the City of Columbia, the U.S. Supreme Court decided not to hear the appeal of the Columbia Daily Tribune, which effectively means that the lower court ruling stands. The Missouri Supreme Court ruled that the Tribune could be found negligent if it "knows or should be able to foresee" that the attacker could harm the injured person as a result of the published material, which included her name and address. Although the 9th U.S. Court of Appeals ruling is not binding in Oklahoma, it is like influential. Thus, Oklahoma courts would likely follow it.

If the people involved would have known each other, we would have used the injured person's name, unless the student was a juvenile, i.e. less than 18 years old. Do not use the name of a juvenile unless you get permission from the managing editor. Generally, the newspaper does not want to stigmatize a juvenile for some petty crime committed at a young age. However, if the crime is serious enough that the editors think the name should be public information, that rule can be waived. In Oklahoma, youths as young as 13 can be charged as an adult for certain felonies, i.e. serious crimes such as murder.

Most newspapers would not print the names of people who have been raped or molested.. The newspapers do not want the person to suffer further because of the publication of the name. Only under exceptional circumstances will this restriction be waived. In most cases, permission of the managing editor is required before names are published.

Do you include the specific address of a crime scene? It depends. If the crime occurred in a public place, include the exact address. If the crime occurred at a private residence, include only the 100 block. For instance, if the fight described earlier had taken place at a private party at someone's home at 356 Melody Lane, refer to it as the 300 block of Melody Lane. The 100 block should be included so that the public knows the general area in which the incident took place. But the people who owned the home should not be subjected to curiosity seekers.

If the crime involves a rape or is sexual in nature, such as molestation, do not include the address if doing so will identify a specific person. When the suspect is related to or lives with the person who was involved, the choice is complicated. But the same general principle applies: do not give the location if it will directly or indirectly identify the person who was harmed.

What do we call the injured person? Do not use the word "victim." Victim implies that the person was injured through no fault of his or her own, and that is often untrue. Generally, it is difficult to discern a clear "victim" because all of the people involved contributed to the incident. Do not prejudge what happened by using the word "victim," which is police jargon. Instead, use the "man," "woman," "student" or some similar term as applicable. Sometimes it is difficult to describe what happened without using "victim." In most cases, however, you can reword the story to eliminate its use.

Do police have a suspect? A suspect is a specific person who police believe might have committed a crime. It takes sufficient evidence in order for police to formally consider a person as a suspect. It is not a generic term for someone involved in a crime. If police have such evidence, then the reporter can call the person a suspect in the story. If not, the person should be referred to as a "man," "woman" or some other term.

How should we describe the person that police are seeking? Generally, do not include a description unless the person is identifiable from that description. The description should contain at least four characteristics of the person along with the type of clothing that the person was wearing. The main benefit of the description for police is that witnesses might have seen the person and will contact them. Secondarily, the public will be warned to look out for a person meeting that description. Consequently, it is very important that the description be sufficiently detailed or it could describe anybody and nobody at the same time. To avoid stereotyping, do not include race unless accompanied by at least four other characteristics. An acceptable example would be a white man in his mid-40s, about 6 feet tall and weighing 180 pounds, thin build, wearing glasses and dressed in a blue suit with a red tie. If the person is not identifiable from the description, leave race out!

Can we use the quotes of witnesses saying someone committed a crime? Generally, quote police any time that the information involves specific charges or the guilt of a person. A journalist has a qualified privilege to quote public officials such as police officers acting in their official capacity. Even if the information is false, the journalist will normally be protected against libel if the information came from an official source and is attributed. A good rule of thumb is to have one attribution per paragraph when police are describing what happened. Make sure that the reader knows that the information came from police, not the reporter.

A journalist has no such protection when quoting witnesses to a crime. If the information turns out to be false and the newspaper publishes it, it can be considered a "republication of the libel." Associate Professor Sandra Davidson advises that at least two sources should say essentially the same thing before the quote is used when it could be libelous, i.e. false information that damages the person's reputation. Obviously, the more people that give a consistent story, the stronger ground you stand on. Consequently, be very careful when editing quotes in crime stories, especially with assertions of past criminal activity. Call the reporter and ensure that the information about past criminal activity has been verified.

In addition, be careful about information that is added to a story. Qualified privilege only applies to material quoted from officials sources such as police officers. If the journalist adds material from previous stories, that material is not protected if it is false. Ensure that the added information seems reasonable and is accurate.

Police make an arrest

Police find the suspect and arrest him. That means that police believe that they have sufficient evidence that the person committed the crime. The person is taken down to the jail and booked, i.e. the charges against him are written in a book. The person is then held in the jail until a bail hearing, which usually occurs within a day, or the person will be released on his own recognizance, i.e. promise to appear later in court. These are some other concerns:

How do we refer to the arrest? When a person is arrested, the person is arrested "in connection with" or "on suspicion of" some crime. If the reporter includes a description of the crime, i.e. "a fight in which another student was seriously injured" use "in connection with": A 21-year-old OSU student was arrested Tuesday in connection with a fight in which another student was seriously injured, police said.

If the reporter mentions a specific charge, i.e. assault, use "on suspicion of": A 21-year-old OSU student was arrested Tuesday on suspicion of assault, police said. You can also combine the two: A 21-year-old OSU student was arrested Tuesday on suspicion of assault in connection with a fight in which another student was seriously injured, police said.

Never use "arrested for" because it implies guilt. Let the courts decide guilt.

Do not use "charged with" unless the prosecuting attorney has formally charged the person. The district attorney will review the evidence between the time of the arrest and the arraignment. If the district attorney determines that sufficient evidence exists, the district attorneywill file formal charges. If not, no formal charges will be filed. Consequently, it is very important that copy editors determine whether formal charges have been filed. When in doubt, ask the reporter.

Some newspapers and wire services will not report an arrest until formal charges have been filed. Their editors contend it is better to be "late" on a story than to report accusations prematurely that could hurt a person's reputation. The incident involving the guard Richard Jewell at the Olympics who was suspected of setting off the explosion is a classic example of what such papers want to avoid. The guard was never charged, yet his reputation and his life were affected.

Should the story contain the name and address of the person arrested? In most cases, yes, if the person is an adult. Whenever possible, give the person's full name, age and complete address. Such information should pinpoint a specific person. The danger with incomplete information is that several people in your circulation area could have the same name. If the information is incomplete, readers could conclude that the wrong person is accused of the crime, causing that person unnecessary embarrassment. Avoid this unfortunate situation by insisting on complete information.

Do not include the names of juveniles unless you get permission from the managing editor. Consult with the news editor concerning stories that include sex charges when the suspect lives at the same address as the person involved.

What if the charge is murder? Murder is a formal charge and should not be used generically in stories when someone is killed. Use murder only when referring to charges. In all other cases, use such terms as "killed," "slain," "shot to death," etc. Again, you want to avoid prejudging the suspect. Do not use the phrase "accused killer." It implies guilt.

What is an arraignment or first appearance? What is bail and bond? As indicated earlier, police arrest a suspect on suspicion of certain charges. They take the person to the police station or county jail and book the person on suspicion of those charges. Police can hold a suspect for only a limted time without formal charges, except when the arrest is a violation of the person's probation or parole, or if the person is wanted elsewhere on other charges. If the charges in the incident are not serious and if police believe that the person will not flee, the person can be released on his or her own recognizance.

If held in jail, normally the person is arraigned the next day and formal charges are specified. The suspect will be asked to plead to the charges, normally either "guilty" or "not guilty." If a guilty plea is entered and the charges are minor, the person can be sentenced at that time. If the charges are serious and a guilty plea is entered, a presentencing hearing is usually conducted before a sentence is determined.

Associated Press style is to use the word "innocent" instead of the formal pleas of "not guilty." AP wants to ensure that the "not" is not dropped during transmission. P> If the person cannot afford an attorney, one will be provided. Normally, the state provides a public defender, an attorney employed by the state.

After the plea, the judge must then determine whether the person should remain in jail or be freed after posting a bond. The judge actually sets bail, the full amount to be paid if the suspect does not appear in court at the prescribed time. The suspect "posts" a bond, normally 10 percent of the bail. Usually, friends or relatives of the person go to a bail-bond company, a firm that puts up the bond for a fee. A nonreturnable fee equivalent to 10 percent of the bail is normally charged. The company posts a bond with the court. The bond is a document in which the company promises to pay the full amount of the bail if the person does not show up in court at the specified time. The person can also put up the full amount of the bail or collateral, such as a deed to property.

The amount of bail or bond is an indication of how serious the judge considers the crime or how serious a flight risk the judge considers the suspect.

There are several way to describe this procedure. You can say that the person is free on "$xxx bail." You can say the person "posted a bond of "$xxx," which will be the same amount as the bail. You can also say he person "posted bail of $xxx."

If the person cannot "make" bail, the person is held in jail "in lieu of" $XXX bail. "In lieu of" essentially means because the person has not paid the money to be allowed out on bail. A suspect is never held on bond. If the bond would have been posted, the person would be free. A date for a preliminary hearing also is set.

Preliminary hearing

Between the initial arraignment, or first appearance, and the preliminary hearing, the prosecution and the defense build their cases. At the preliminary hearing the prosecution must present enough evidence to convince the judge that there is "probable cause" to try the defendant. The prosecution can call witnesses, but the prosecutor is not required to present all of the evidence, just enough to persuade the judge. The defense, on the other, does not have to call any witnesses. The prosecution has the "burden of proof." However, the defense can call witnesses. If the judge rules that there is sufficient evidence, the defendant is "bound over" for trial. Some of the charges often will be dropped. The judge also will set a date for the second arraignment.

If the prosecution has a strong case, the defense often will waive its right to a preliminary hearing. By doing so, however, the defense gives up a chance to learn more about the prosecution's case and to question witnesses.

Second arraignment

The second arraignment is very similar to the first one. The defendant must enter a plea to the charges. If the defendant pleads guilty, a presentencing investigation is usually conducted. If a defendant pleads not guilty, the judge sets a trial date. Other pleas include not guilty by reason of insanity and no contest. No contest means that the defendant does not admit guilt. By entering this plea, however, defendants acknowledge that they have little chance of being found not guilty. Despite their claim, the penalties are the same if they plead guilty or no contest.

What is a plea bargain? Most cases do not go to trial. If they did, the court system would be more clogged that it already is. In Tulsa, for example, it is estimated that only 1 percent of cases actually go to trial. Instead, the prosecution and the defense enter into a plea bargain. A plea bargain entails an agreement for the defendant to plead guilty to certain charges in exchange for some reduced penalty. Normally, either the charges are reduced or the prosecutor recommends a lighter sentence.

A plea bargain has both advantages and disadvantages for both sides. The advantage for the prosecution is that it saves the costs of a trial and avoids the uncertainty of its outcome. A conviction is guaranteed. But the prosecution reduces the charges, which often upsets the family of those who have been hurt or killed by the accused. In some cases, the prosecution will get permission from the family members before agreeing to the plea bargain. Sometimes families prefer the plea bargain because they know that the defendant will be punished.

The chief advantage for the defendant is the reduced charge or sentence. It can mean the difference between life in prison without parole and the death penalty. The disadvantage is that some form of punishment is assured.

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